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Post by dearben on Feb 11, 2011 17:32:41 GMT -5
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the Wolf
Padawan
And even though the world crumbles and falls in front of our eyes, I will still stand here with you
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Post by the Wolf on Feb 12, 2011 9:02:20 GMT -5
ABSOLUTELY PERFECT  |
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Post by Briseis on Feb 12, 2011 9:47:04 GMT -5
That was just so beautiful Danielle! I absolutely loved it  Very hot  And the ending just made me squee ;D Perfect |
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Post by kenobifan on Feb 12, 2011 12:48:49 GMT -5
Honestly, after reading this, I feel like I need to run to the freezer and get some ice cubes to cool myself down. *fans self*  Beautifully written, ... the words floated like a perfect song.. Gosh, you should have a vid made to this story. My heart overfillith with Obidala. WOOHOO! ;D |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 12, 2011 12:49:09 GMT -5
Amazing job. Very, very nicely done.
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Post by pronker on Feb 12, 2011 14:44:41 GMT -5
;DHot in more ways than one and I enjoyed the AU part of your story, the way that Qui-Gon and Tahl, as well, eluded their bitter fates in canon. Good story!! Just right for St. Valentine's Day!
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Post by aravynkenobi on Feb 12, 2011 15:40:13 GMT -5
I seriously have tears in my eyes right now. A hot and steamy fic, ending with fairy tale happiness. Beautiful, Danielle.
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 12, 2011 15:40:16 GMT -5
OH. MY. GAWD.   That was so hot, Danielle. I love all the water-play. And your words were a lot like that. They really flowed beautifully. Then you made it so sweet and romantic at the end. *sighs* Amazing fic! Worth the wait, definitely. |
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Post by lonestardrifters on Feb 12, 2011 22:55:16 GMT -5
YEAAAHHHH!!!!
This was so beautiful, our hearts ache.
Me and my sister read this at the same time, and it was a test of our bond.
There was a whole lot of "Don't read over my shoulder!", "Pretend I'm not here", and "Stop Breathing" But we got through it in one piece. You style of writing is very professional like a real Author great job!
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Post by storykeeper on Feb 13, 2011 19:33:32 GMT -5
SWOOOOONNN!!!!!! |
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Post by danielle on Feb 14, 2011 8:52:19 GMT -5
Wow, thank you, I'm so glad you all enjoyed it. I was quite nervous about this as its the first time I've written this steamy for Obidala, but I'm very pleased at how this has been received. Thank you Rosalie, your words mean a lot especially as my favourite steamy fics are ones you have written. Lynda, I wish I had the programs and the knowhow to make vids, but I haven't as yet. I keep meaning to investigate now I have an external hard drive, but I'm never too sure what is the best program to use. If anyone fancies making one for this, they're welcome to. |
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Post by Briseis on Feb 15, 2011 6:08:44 GMT -5
Lynda, I wish I had the programs and the knowhow to make vids, but I haven't as yet. I keep meaning to investigate now I have an external hard drive, but I'm never too sure what is the best program to use. If anyone fancies making one for this, they're welcome to. You know Daniele, it's funny because when I was reading this I was actually listening to 'Sexual Healing' by Marvin Gaye . And I thought, it would be so cool to do a vid to this fic... so you never know |
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Post by obigirl on Feb 16, 2011 5:09:49 GMT -5
WHOA Baby! its not called "hot summer nights" for nothing! that really was hot!
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 17, 2011 16:54:19 GMT -5
Thank you Rosalie, your words mean a lot especially as my favourite steamy fics are ones you have written. That's a very generous compliment, Danielle. Especially considering the high hotness content of this fic. Most kind. *hugs* |
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Post by obiwankenobi on Feb 20, 2011 17:19:44 GMT -5
The one she wore tonight was positively indecent, the way it hung over her body like a veil, clinging to her skin, with a parting down her back that left little to his overactive imagination.
Best line ever.
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Very hot 
And the ending just made me squee ;D Perfect
