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Post by danielle on Feb 11, 2012 2:27:38 GMT -5
Hello there, please leave feedback here for morethanacandle's Banishing of Ignorance ;D
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Post by danielle on Feb 12, 2012 11:07:20 GMT -5
I love reading your magnificent pieces, you have such an eloquence and intensity, your words draw me into the scene and then refuse to let go, although I never want to be released. There is such a power in your writing, it reminds me of Ellis Peters, a peaceful devoutness.
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Post by kenobifan on Feb 12, 2012 11:26:49 GMT -5
Aww, that was great! I particularly liked this line: An indulgence of curiosity to banish ignorance. There is no ignorance; there is knowledge.  |
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 12, 2012 18:03:00 GMT -5
Your style is so elegant and it flows so beautifully. This piece in particular is compelling because I feel like a fly on the wall almost -- watching and listening to this sweet exchange between the two of them. It was expressive and descriptive without feeling too heavy and simple in its beauty without feeling too light. It was just right. Thank you, for the millionth time, for making time to write something for us. It was a very special addition to our fics this year. |
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Post by pronker on Feb 12, 2012 18:27:04 GMT -5
 Nice wordplay with 'impertinence' there and I liked his cheeky glint of the eye ----
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Post by Deleted on Feb 12, 2012 23:31:06 GMT -5
Absolutely amazing imagery you've created. Brilliantly done.
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Nice wordplay with 'impertinence' there and I liked his cheeky glint of the eye ----