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Post by kenobifan on Feb 13, 2007 22:38:35 GMT -5
Please leave a word or two. I know Kris, would appreciate your comments.
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Post by obiwanfan30 on Feb 15, 2007 10:10:56 GMT -5
This was a beautiful story. I wanted to cry as Obi-Wan was finally able to grieve. I'm glad he was able to let Padme know how he felt about her.  |
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Post by kenobifan on Feb 15, 2007 12:37:36 GMT -5
A beautiful cover to the story... It fits perfectly. (added cover this morning).
I love how Padme helped Obi-Wan through his grief, and how he showed his appreciation... OH YEAH!! ;D
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Post by Deleted on Feb 15, 2007 12:42:46 GMT -5
Great job!! I absolutely loved it!! There was no one better then Padme to help Obi-Wan through his grief and despair. Wonderfully written my friend! I love the cover too. I couldn't agree more with Lynda, it is very beautiful and conveys all of the emotion that the fic is filled with! Two thumbs up!! |
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Post by myascarlet on Feb 15, 2007 14:52:01 GMT -5
I usually find first-person stories quite difficult to read, but not this one. Very sweet and beautiful, it gave me the tingles when he first kissed her ;D. Loved the ending too.
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Post by eilis on Feb 15, 2007 15:19:33 GMT -5
This was absolutely beautiful, maybe the most touching obidala story I've ever read from Kris. This has made my day |
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 15, 2007 16:39:55 GMT -5
I, too, sometimes find first person storys a bit of a drag. But Kris, you did great things with this one! I, as a reader, felt all the emotions at work here. It was well crafted all around. I really loved the scene in the generator room as Obi-Wan is experiencing his vision. Seperated from Padme just as he had been. I was really scared for him!! Anyway, again, well done!  |
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Post by admin on Feb 15, 2007 21:40:00 GMT -5
Thanks everyone. I thought this fic was a bit of a downer. I promise the other one I sent in will be MUCH more pleasant. |
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