If I Lay Here FEEDBACK (Day 1)

[kenobifan]

A word or two, would be appreciated for Voodoolily's great job...

[myascarlet]

Aww very sweet! Anyone would feel safe with Obi-Wan there next to them.

[kenobifan]

VoodooLily, you should continue this.. Really should. ;D

It left me, wanting more.

Wonderfully done... More? Please!!

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lynda said:

VoodooLily, you should continue this.. Really should. ;D

It left me, wanting more.

Wonderfully done... More? Please!!

I mirror Lynda's sentiments completely. When I noticed I was at the end, I wanted there to be more.

Great job, though. I loved it. It was the perfect thing to wake up and read this morning before classes start. I also agree with Mya, no woman in wouldn't feel completely safe with Obi-Wan lying next to her. ::sigh:: Very well done!! Two thumbs way up!!

[NoobianRose]

You're telling me this isn't a WIP??? Aw! Now I'm sad!

Very good fic, I really enjoyed it and, as others keep saying, I wanted more. It was really touching.

It's funny, actually, I was just thinking that I'd really like to see another fic about Padme and Obi dealing with Qui-Gon's death. Perfect timing! ;D

[voodoolily]

Hi, everyone! Thanks for the feedback and the compliments to my fic. I seem to get requests "for more" on a number of my fics, and see that this one is no exception. I'll think about continuing it somehow, but it depends...as Christian said, "Sometimes it takes awhile for inspiration to come." Also, I want to say that the title and partial inspiration for this fic comes from Snow Patrol's song "Chasing Cars," so I was psyched to see LupisNoctis do a music video to that song. Will be posting comments on that later...