A Path Not Taken FEEDBACK (Day 1)

[kenobifan]

A kind word or two... ;D

[evearmand]

This a Great Story! I love the simpleness and intensity of the relationship in this one. It also helps explain why they would never have gotten together. Awesome Job!!

[Deleted]

I'm in total awe...That was amazingly written. Wow! I haven't read all of the fics for today, but so far yours is my favorite. There was no dramatic end or anything like that, but the simplicity of it is what won me over. On the surface it was nothing more then a conversation in Padme's apartment before Obi-Wan was to leave to capture Greivous, but there was something so much deeper there. Great job!! I can't express how much I truly enjoyed this fic. Bravo!!

[kenobifan]

If only she had chosen a different path.

And that's why there's AU.. for the "what ifs."

I love this story,... you know that.

[myascarlet]

Beautifully written story! So sweet and sad and Obi-Wan just perfect. *sigh*.

I always remember the quote from Ewan about a scene between Obi-Wan and Padme probably being cut because it was "too romantic" and now I can imagine this is what happened (although, of course it wouldn't have actually been anywhere near this good!)

[NoobianRose]

Wow. I'm so honored by all of your comments! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.

I'm glad you all noted the simplicity. It was something I was going for.

*sighs* My day has been made! ;D

[eilis]

myascarlet said:

Beautifully written story! So sweet and sad and Obi-Wan just perfect. *sigh*.

I always remember the quote from Ewan about a scene between Obi-Wan and Padme probably being cut because it was "too romantic" and now I can imagine this is what happened (although, of course it wouldn't have actually been anywhere near this good!)

Ditto! ^

It was wonderful. You know, it's reading great stories like this, which focus on the characters while staying faithful to their personalities from the first two movies and the books, which make me all the more regret how f***ed up character development in ROTS, or lack thereof, was....if only Lucas was as good with it as he is with orchestring space battles

Anyway, at least we have authors like you who more than make up for it! ;D