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Post by kenobifan on Feb 14, 2007 20:11:56 GMT -5
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Post by obiwanfan30 on Feb 16, 2007 13:18:39 GMT -5
Whoa! This was HOT! Angry sex turning into tender sex, I could handle that. Why did she leave him for Anakin?! Why?!?!?!
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Post by lincoln6echo on Feb 16, 2007 13:38:50 GMT -5
Beautiful story and one of the best Obidala I have read in a long time. You see, despite the fact I am a hopeless romantic I have paired Obi-Wan with several people, deep inside I know the canon Obi-Wan would not break the Code...that romantic love is not for him. It is a part of his Jedi mistique... I think it is easier to write AU or stories in which the Code doesn't forbid love, and I am "guilty" of this myself, and I am impressed when someone tries and manages to show how much Obi-Wan cares for Padmé, how much he is still a man with desires etc, but still he remains a Jedi that cannot love. Well done!
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Post by kenobifan on Feb 16, 2007 16:18:23 GMT -5
Did a wonderful job with this story...and HOT too! My brain is kind of mush now, can't think straight. LOL I have to get on the road, her shortly... and then when I get home, I'll read the rest of the stories.. again. Yes, again.. This is so much fun!! ;D
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Post by myascarlet on Feb 16, 2007 16:32:29 GMT -5
Wow , that was a fabulous story, the characterisations of Obi-Wan and Padme were both incredibly good. I loved all the tension you built up in their argument - reminded me of the scene in Pride and Prejudice (movie) where they're arguing and so very nearly kiss... but here we got kissing and more ;D. Just breaks my heart for Obi-Wan to think what is to come .
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 16, 2007 19:07:23 GMT -5
Thanks, again, everyone for the lovely feedback! It's always a pleasure writing sexy stuff for these two (as long as it's with each other!!). :-D I'm glad it worked. You can ask Lynda (or just look at my author's note) I was kinda worried about the reception this one was going to get . . .
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Post by evearmand on Feb 16, 2007 19:42:48 GMT -5
This was HOT!! I really liked the intensity of the relationship. I also liked how you described why/how she ends up with Anakin. The Force has its own will. We Jedi just humbly follow it.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 16, 2007 19:58:16 GMT -5
Great job!! I loved every bit of it!! ;D
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Post by kenobifan on Feb 16, 2007 21:02:35 GMT -5
You shouldn't worry so much, NoobianRose. It was really....really, well written. ;D
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 16, 2007 21:08:38 GMT -5
Well I know that NOW!
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 16, 2007 21:09:16 GMT -5
LOL, the thing posted before I was done! Stupid thing! Oh well, maybe it was trying to tell me something!
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Post by admin on Feb 17, 2007 11:19:06 GMT -5
Excellent. This was my favorite line -
the pair found a peace of their own making.
No blasters required.
I really enjoyed it. Very well written NR.
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Post by clouseau on Feb 19, 2007 16:11:40 GMT -5
This fic has been an a very pleasant surprise. Definitely, one of the best ObiDala stories I have read in a very long time. Love it how your characters’ starting piont is canon. Love it how you push them to the limits until they become more human, more fragile and passionate than ever but in a realistic context.
Honestly I’m very impresed with your writing. I’ll be watching your carrear with great interest! ;D
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 20, 2007 1:10:08 GMT -5
*bows* I'm honored, Bea. Thank you very much for your kind words.
I do love to take cannon as my starting point and just see where it takes me (or could have taken the characters had George Lucas pushed them).
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