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Post by danielle on Feb 11, 2012 2:26:40 GMT -5
Hello there, please leave feedback here for Danielle's second part of Intimacy Without Intricacy ;D
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Post by kenobifan on Feb 12, 2012 10:28:24 GMT -5
You write so eloquently and very much in character. I love how you do their characters.
Greater need to increase the size of the Jedi Order? Does that mean we are going to have some cute little Obidala babies? ;D
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Post by danielle on Feb 12, 2012 10:50:53 GMT -5
Possibly. They may be a long time coming in this one, as its rather darker than my usual works.
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 12, 2012 15:50:31 GMT -5
GAH! Danielle! Now I know how you guys felt when I kept you on the hook for three days with "Dreamscape"! Consarnit! I'm incredibly intrigued at how you're building this mission. I can't WAIT to read how it all plays out. Should be very very exciting indeed. You have an incredibly beautiful and intricate way of telling a story that draws the reader in and just won't let go! LET ME GO DANIELLE!! . . . Actually? Don't. I like it! Lol.
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Post by pronker on Feb 12, 2012 18:10:13 GMT -5
And so we get Anakin's thinking scene, wow, that was neat, and Obi-Wan in full Masterly mode as he confesses his need for some reasonable Soul Healer treatment. I liked that part a lot. ;D
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Post by Deleted on Feb 12, 2012 23:42:35 GMT -5
I can't wait to read the next part!!! So...uh...how much longer do I have to wait? LoL! Take your time, I know greatness takes time.
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