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Post by danielle on Feb 11, 2012 2:28:35 GMT -5
Hello there, please leave feedback here for Lynda's story. ;D
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Post by danielle on Feb 12, 2012 11:03:06 GMT -5
So intense a scene, filled with such despair and yet a certain truth of hope being present still, even when all around lies despair.
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 12, 2012 17:01:12 GMT -5
AW! *heart swells with love* A beautiful re-imagining of this scene, Lynda. I think you did an absolutely lovely job with it. This was my favorite line:
Briefly, memories reeled around like puzzle pieces.
Really lovely imagery there. I loved this piece very much. Wonderful job, my friend. *hugs*
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Post by kenobifan on Feb 12, 2012 17:39:24 GMT -5
Thank you Danielle and Rosalie, for the wonderful and kind words.
You made my day!! ;D
One of these days, I'll be able to write like you both do.
With eloquence.
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 12, 2012 17:48:43 GMT -5
You're already there, my friend. It was wonderful work. For realz.  |
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Post by pronker on Feb 12, 2012 18:20:49 GMT -5
Sad, but the sense of hope finally coming through, that helped me feel better. 'The Force ached, too,' really liked that phrase.
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Post by kenobifan on Feb 12, 2012 19:23:22 GMT -5
Thank you, I'm glad I was able to make you feel better, Pronker.  |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 12, 2012 23:29:43 GMT -5
Very nicely done, my friend. Truly an amazing job.
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Post by kenobifan on Feb 13, 2012 1:56:58 GMT -5
Thanks, Amelia. ;D It means a lot to me that you and others think so. Woah.. you are up late, my friend. |
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