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Post by danielle on Feb 11, 2012 2:31:36 GMT -5
Hello there, please leave feedback here for Kenobi2009's 'I'll wait for You.' ;D
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Post by danielle on Feb 12, 2012 11:10:12 GMT -5
I love the struggle inside Obi-Wan through this, the surrendering to her will despite himself and Padme's quiet, mature understanding, urging him on patiently. Would dearly love this to continue, so many portents of the future wait to be explored.
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Post by kenobifan on Feb 12, 2012 11:43:53 GMT -5
His old gaze narrowed. “More specifically, for you, Master Kenobi.” That made me laugh.. Wonderfully written.. And especially, I thought it was a nice tribute to Liz.  |
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 12, 2012 18:12:34 GMT -5
Poor Obi-Wan. You can really feel the depth of his struggle here -- fighting a battle between duty and the heart. You do a wonderful job of capturing that and of capturing the characters. Feels really genuine. I also think Liz would have been super proud of this, and of you. A fitting tribute to one of the greatest writers in our fandom. |
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Post by pronker on Feb 12, 2012 18:33:37 GMT -5
Ah, captured by a kiss, well you were, and now you shall get the reward, sweetened by some wine -- I liked how Liz's ideas come through and the style prevailed. Miss ya, Liz. /Very/ nice tribute.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 12, 2012 23:45:54 GMT -5
You did a wonderful job with this. I commend you for your courage to take on this task. I think you did a truly amazing job. I think Rosalie got it right, Liz would be proud of the work you've done.
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