Feedback For Noobian Rose (day 2)

[danielle]

Hello there, please post feedback here for Noobian Rose's Invisible Stars. ;D

[danielle]

I really cannot praise this piece enough, your eloquence is truly masterful, drawing me into the scene from the first line and not letting me go. The story gives me solace in the same way it gives solace to Obi-Wan, hope in the midst of chaos. Some parallels with the world today and symbolism abound. I could picture this so vividly. Genius.

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I am truly at a loss for words over the brilliance and emotion of this masterpiece you have to so beautifullu created, my friend. You never cease to amaze me with your literary genius. Brava! *applauds*

[kenobifan]

Yeah, what Danielle said above!! ;D She writes such classy reviews.

I truly felt like I was right there, and you made it seem so realistic.

A very enjoyable piece of writing.

[pronker]

I really enjoyed the light/dark imagery of him waiting in her office and their unseen, but probably sensed, little grins and twinkles of the eye, just like stars. Lovely!

[NoobianRose]

Wow everyone! Thank you all so much for your kind words. As our lovely fic mod, Danielle, can tell you, I was kinda worried about this one. Not sure if I'd done what I wanted to originally achieve with it.

@ Danielle: I'm overjoyed that you felt that way. And all the little things you mentioned (about the modern parallels, etc) were definitely things I wanted people to get out of it so I'm pleased it resonated with you. You've been very generous about this piece. Thank you.

@ Amelia: Oh go on! *blushes* Seriously though, like I said before, I highly value your opinion. So I'm really really glad that you thought that much of it. Thank you, my friend.

@ Lynda: Your review was wonderful, Lynda. I really appreciate your taking the time and I'm gald you enjoyed it. Makes my day.

@ Pronker: Thank you so much! I didn't really think about that light/dark imagery all that much while writing it, but I definitely see it now. I'm glad you liked that.