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Post by danielle on Feb 10, 2012 5:26:50 GMT -5
Hello all, please leave feedback here for Danielle's 100 words. ;D
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Post by Briseis on Feb 11, 2012 9:56:15 GMT -5
Wow Danielle, those were all so amazing!  Very beautiful and fitting for the OVOC  |
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Post by danielle on Feb 11, 2012 10:30:34 GMT -5
Thank you Natalie, I'm glad you enjoyed reading them.
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Post by kenobifan on Feb 11, 2012 11:05:05 GMT -5
*happy claps* Now, that has put me in the Obidala mood. |
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Post by danielle on Feb 11, 2012 11:36:00 GMT -5
Thank you, I'm glad you liked them.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 11, 2012 12:26:19 GMT -5
*applause* Brava! Those were fabulous!
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Post by pronker on Feb 11, 2012 14:44:43 GMT -5
Sweet and powerful, well done series! -- pronker
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 11, 2012 15:45:44 GMT -5
OMG Danielle! So beautiful. You have such an incredible flow and imagery to your words. Incredible pieces all of these.
This line was my favorite:
Brown eyes met sea shade gazes not with blushing shyness but with an amber assurance that their souls knew each other and had matched and mated long ago.
*melts* So much tension there. Gorgeous.
And the "Lust" one? Well I have no words for that. Really hot, Danielle. *drools* Me Likey! ;D
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Post by obiwankenobi on Feb 12, 2012 1:11:46 GMT -5
Wow, you really have a handle on language! You should definitely write a book, you've got a distinct voice.
Soo much beautiful Obidala goin on I don't think I can handle it!
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Post by danielle on Feb 12, 2012 10:41:22 GMT -5
Thank you, I'm glad you like them. And when my muse returns from AWOL, and finishes my obidala epic, a book is what I will try to write.
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Very beautiful and fitting for the OVOC 
