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Post by danielle on Feb 10, 2012 5:38:32 GMT -5
Hell all, please leave feedback here for obiwankenobi/Spiritp's story. ;D
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Post by Briseis on Feb 11, 2012 10:09:51 GMT -5
That was so amazing! I was so happy when I read that Padmé wanted him too, but it was just a dream!  Poor Obi *huggles him* And that part at the end about the thorn, made me cry. |
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Post by danielle on Feb 11, 2012 10:36:54 GMT -5
I love the symbolism of the rose and thorn, the possibilities in the dream and the hints of unanswered looks and unspoken words. The harsh reality of canon is there, but like with the canon, you always wonder if there's more behind their interaction.
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Post by kenobifan on Feb 11, 2012 11:42:35 GMT -5
Hey you!! I thought you said you didn't have time to write any fanfic? Or were you just teasing me? OR did I forget?  This was a very nice surprise, my old Padawan!! Obi-Wan sure had a hot dream about his true love.  I enjoyed the read. ;D |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 11, 2012 11:48:43 GMT -5
Wow! That was wonderful. What a shame he had to wake up so soon. Haha!
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Post by pronker on Feb 11, 2012 15:53:12 GMT -5
Very well done -- clean and nice and aw, yeah, the ending  /shakes all three of them till they see reason/ |
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 11, 2012 16:08:07 GMT -5
Thank you SO much, Bonna, for submitting. This was a wonderful piece. I laughed all the way through the first part. Obi-Wan's internal monologue was priceless. And then the last part. The way you were able to do a complete change in the tone of the piece and make it all seem so natural and on point. Really incredible. I felt so sad for him at the end there. For them both really.
Thank you again. I loved it!
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Poor Obi *huggles him* And that part at the end about the thorn, made me cry.
/shakes all three of them till they see reason/
