The Beginning by Noobian Rose

[danielle]

Here is NoobianRose's second fic for the convention, the Beginning.

Title: The Beginning
Author: NoobianRose
Pairing: Obidala (For the 2013 OVOC)
Rating: G
Set: TPM

daniellasbureau.co.uk/StarWars/OVOC/2013/Beginning.html

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[danielle]

Indeed, the journey has only just begun. And holds so much promise. Excellent work as always, Rosalie, I love reading your fics, they always inspire.

[Kate]

Great story! Those first few paragraphs especially were so touching, I loved your descriptions there. They really made the story come alive. I loved how you showed Padmé's inner struggle and how Obi-Wan knows just what to say in order to comfort her.

[obigirl]

THAT WAS AMAZING!!! love it showing them meeting for the first time and how bound he felt to her from the beginning love it!!

[flgirl4]

Lovely!! Excellent descriptions; I love how vulnerable you make Padmé. You retain the innocence of her age while reconciling it with the power of her station. This is how they met. No question.

[NoobianRose]

@ Danielle: Thank you, my friend. I feel the same way about your work . . . even when you're evil and tease me with "to be continued's"!

@ Kate: I appreciate that, Kate. Thank you. I didn't have much of an idea about where I wanted this piece to go. But the original idea was that image of Padme sitting there by herself just trying to sort it all out.

@ obigirl: Aw! That's sweet. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

flgirl4: That's really kind of you to say, flgirl4. And quite the compliment coming from such a wonderful writer.

[pronker]

Sweet and full of promise - he understood her so well,, and helped her to understand herself. Great fic!

[aravynkenobi]

Poor Padme. I really like how you've looked into her thoughts during the beginning of the blockade. We get it drilled into our heads that she's the ruler of the whole planet and it's easy to forget that she's also not much older than a child. This was a very sweet and wonderful scene between these two. Very aptly titled. :-)

[NoobianRose]

@ pronker: Kind words. Thank you so much. That's exactly what I tried to convey.

@ Mel: I thought much the same thing. Wanted to show something else. Glad it came through. Thank you very much, my friend. *hugs*

[ALS]

It's bery good! it shows Padme's insecurities and how vulnerable she is. it also shows how dependable and very understanding Obi Wan is. they complement each other nicely.

[NoobianRose]

Thanks very much for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the feedback!