Bid Time Return by Danielle

[danielle]

Here is Danielle's second fic for the convention.

Title: Bid Time Return.
Author: Danielle
Pairing: O/P
Rating: M
Notes/Blurb: This is a time travel story, where Padmé is thrown back in time and given the chance to change history. Where her hopes begin and the journey ends, a life time of changes come into play. I started this in 2010, but due to various distractions and other stories, I have only seven parts completed so far. It is my hope to continue this after I have finished Intimacy Without Intricacy, which is why I decided to post a taster for you during the OVOC. Enjoy.

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[Kate]

Very intriguing idea! I really like this what-if scenario. It will be interesting to see how the story plays out when Padmé is capable of making decisions with the knowledge of what is to come. It also makes me wonder whether it will backfire on her at one point. I really liked this taster, and I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of it eventually! Great job!

[obigirl]

oooh I love the time travel idea in star wars and with Padme AMAZING!!! bring on more!!!

[the Wolf]

ooh, this was amazing, Danielle! really loved the idea of Padmé traveling back in time to change the course of history. looking forward to the next part!

[flgirl4]

Ah, why do I do this? I force all my inspiration to you so that you may continue this fic and soon! Excellent idea. There have been a couple I have read where Obi-wan goes back in time, but never an Obidala where she does. This should prove to be very interesting. Excellent, excellent, excellent!

[NoobianRose]

GAH! OMG Danielle! This was so fricken exciting! I'm totally hooked. Whyfor you leave me hangin like that!? Not cool.

I just can't say enough about the ease of your writing style. It flows so beautifully and is so descriptive. I felt like I was there with her.

I really can't wait to read more. This was a very strong start!!

[pronker]

I like the way she is determined to have fate reverse itself 0-0 and is proactive about life -- Obi-Wan can't help but notice, and admire! Good start!

[danielle]

Thank you all, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. I've got three chapters left of IWI, so hopefully I can return to writing this soon. I had hoped to be finished with IWI by now, but to due to RL I found it very difficult to write the crucial duel of fates chapter.

[ALS]

ooooooooooooooooohhhhh usuallly it's Obi Wan who gets to travel across time, now it's Padme!
very very interesting. i wonder how it will play out.....