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Post by danielle on Feb 14, 2013 10:49:18 GMT -5
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Post by danielle on Feb 17, 2013 3:49:37 GMT -5
So poignant, so haunting, beautiful poem. It has a sense of timelessness about it, as though its as old as the stars in the heavens.
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Post by Kate on Feb 17, 2013 4:35:34 GMT -5
I loved the repetition of that last line and part of the first line. Those really defined the poem for me. I think you've written something very beautiful.
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Post by obigirl on Feb 17, 2013 6:22:41 GMT -5
Obidala in a poem I like it!!! gorgeous!!
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Post by flgirl4 on Feb 17, 2013 11:54:07 GMT -5
Powerful piece, and so damn sad!
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 17, 2013 15:03:13 GMT -5
So poignant and powerful. Bittersweet -- just the way I like it! A lovely piece.  |
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Post by pronker on Feb 17, 2013 16:41:21 GMT -5
Good structure and of course the imagery is powerful - I liked the sense of her waiting for him in the Force.
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