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Post by danielle on Feb 8, 2016 6:18:36 GMT -5
Click the link below to read the story. A Glimpse of WhitePlease post your appreciation for this story by replying in this thread |
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 13, 2016 4:37:27 GMT -5
Danielle? You, my friend, are such a wordsmith! The way you craft a story, whether it's a shorter piece or a fic with several chapters, is so engaging. You held back just enough in this one to keep me guessing. Was he seeing a ghost? Was she really there? If she was really there with him, what had happened on Mustafar?? Each question I had was answered, while you posed two more to keep my eyes traveling across your words. And then??? The delightful SURPRISE TWIST at the end! *squee*
Really lovely piece. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
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Post by danielle on Feb 13, 2016 4:48:06 GMT -5
*blushes* Pleasure. You're too kind, Rosalie. I'm glad you liked it.
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Post by kenobiamidala on Feb 13, 2016 4:52:33 GMT -5
WHOA!!! WHOA!!! what did I just read? Danielle, that was INCREDIBLE i really, really thought this story was going to go another wy but you surprised me and Obi Wan lived and made it out of the Death Star with Luke, Leia and Han and then Padme was on board WOW! and the twist at the end WELL DONE!!
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Post by Kate on Feb 13, 2016 13:09:30 GMT -5
Awww, that was great! I'm just going to think of this when I next watch the films again. Much happier ending than what we got.  Thank you so much for bringing a smile to my face! |
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Post by Briseis on Feb 13, 2016 18:42:04 GMT -5
This is amazing Danielle!! Just what should have happened in the films. As I was reading, I was sure Obi was gonna die and possibly get reunited with Padmé, but then he survived and saw her and I was like "OMG." And they were together and the twins are THEIR twins, and now I'm flailing! I love this so much! <3
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Post by danielle on Feb 14, 2016 2:50:55 GMT -5
Thank you all, I'm glad it was such an enjoyable read.
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Post by pronker on Feb 14, 2016 13:20:37 GMT -5
Wonderful, Danielle - and the twists were engaged in smoothly and I kept reading, hoping for the ending that you delivered beautifully *mwah*
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Post by Sarandipity on Feb 14, 2016 17:26:03 GMT -5
Whoa!! Did not expect this twist o.o Sooo good! I love the way you tell the story, in retrospect, never giving away too much too soon... so happy with this ending. Very sweet <3
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Post by danielle on Feb 15, 2016 3:48:56 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Post by katwithlove on Feb 15, 2016 14:27:17 GMT -5
Can this please be canon? That was really great! You didn't give anything away too soon and I really wasn't expecting that. It was quite brilliant<3
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Thank you so much for bringing a smile to my face!
