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Post by danielle on Feb 8, 2016 6:29:54 GMT -5
Click the link below to read the story Disobedience & TreasonPlease show your appreciation for the story by replying to this thread. |
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 13, 2016 4:21:43 GMT -5
Aw!! This was very sweet, Takianna! Nice for these two to finally have their happy ending.  I absolutely LOVED your dialogue. That was the star of this piece for me! "I love you in a way that I shouldn’t, but I want to grasp every moment with you until my fingers bleed from gripping it so tightly"GAH! So beautiful! Love this imagery. |
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Post by kenobiamidala on Feb 13, 2016 4:30:57 GMT -5
Oh!!!!! I am crying tears of happiness and I thought they would be sad tears!
THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHING!!
Obi Wan gave up the Jedi Order for Padme and Master Yoda gave him blessings, love Yoda!!!
This was beautifully well written with cheekiness from Obi Wan by wiping her fiance's memories of Padme and she couldn't believe her eyes when she saw Obi Wan at the altar
LOVE IT, LOVE I, LOVE IT!!!
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Post by danielle on Feb 13, 2016 5:52:30 GMT -5
“Bend the rules, I should,” Yoda said a smile playing across his face.
Yes you should, Master Yoda.
Absolutely wonderful, I read this with a happy grin steadily growing on my face. Exactly what should have happened.
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Post by Kate on Feb 13, 2016 13:04:56 GMT -5
Great piece, very light-hearted, reading it made me smile. Those little bits about Anakin having half a ship in his room and Obi-Wan being excellent in bed really made me laugh.  |
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Post by takianna on Feb 13, 2016 13:43:52 GMT -5
Thank you guys! Awesome! Glad I could contribute!  ? |
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Post by Briseis on Feb 13, 2016 16:18:55 GMT -5
This is amazing Takianna!! It made me feel so many things - I laughed, cried with sad feels, smirked over cheeky Obi, giggled at Yoda, and cried from the ending. It was so beautiful!
“I brought you the stars and the moons you requested.” OMG T_T
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Post by pronker on Feb 14, 2016 13:27:42 GMT -5
It's a sweet treat for this St. Valentine's Day, thanks, Takianna!!
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Post by Sarandipity on Feb 14, 2016 16:58:01 GMT -5
"She was his anchor in a life that sometimes seemed to drift." <333 I really enjoyed this Takianna! I was really worried for a second that things wouldn't work out, but they did!! I especially loved the conversation with Yoda and the back story about Jedi relationships. I totally agree with this, and wish it was official canon. Also, so happy you include some info on Obi-Wan's family.. I always wonder about his past. Very sweet story <3 |
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Post by katwithlove on Feb 15, 2016 14:24:17 GMT -5
This was really amazing! It was soo sweet and your dialogue was really great.
My favourite part would have to be the ending when he says “I brought you the stars and the moons you requested.” That just seems so Obi-wan to me, especially an in love Obi-wan!
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