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Post by danielle on Feb 8, 2016 6:31:40 GMT -5
Click the link below to read the story. Absence Makes the HeartPlease show your appreciation for the story by replying to this thread. |
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Post by Kate on Feb 14, 2016 8:40:10 GMT -5
Very well-written, Danielle! I enjoyed the interaction between Obi-Wan and Padmé. And the hot bit near the end.  I also liked the addition of that last little line coming back to the start of the story. Great read! |
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Post by pronker on Feb 14, 2016 13:36:46 GMT -5
I liked how the story showed their reasoning, and then blended in passion. Grand work!
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 14, 2016 14:27:18 GMT -5
Wonderful, Danielle! Your words are so beautiful. I really love how you portrayed Obi-Wan's internal moral struggle over his feelings for her. And it's so great to see how this oh so subtly tied in to the story we saw yesterday! When I read that story I couldn't help but wonder how that all played out. Aaaaand here it is! Here come Luke and Leia! Lol. And that ending!  |
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Post by danielle on Feb 14, 2016 14:29:02 GMT -5
And I was a little uncertain about it only this morning. I'm relieved you all like it.
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Post by Briseis on Feb 14, 2016 20:24:46 GMT -5
That was utterly incredible Danielle!! I thought it was going to be all angsty with her never knowing of his feelings, but then came the revelation that she does. And that she wants to dissolve her union with Anakin. I loved how beautiful they were together, so gentle and intimate. But then Anakin is alive! Dun-dun-DUNNNNN!! I wonder if this will be continued.
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Post by kenobiamidala on Feb 15, 2016 1:04:28 GMT -5
NO!!!! CLIFF HANGER ENDING!!! Anakin's alive and after that night of passion WHOA BABY!!! that is hot!!! H-O-T!!!!! that was so beautifully written from going to her apartment to tell her the news, to having her confess what happened and her true feelings to the passionate love making my word!!! AMAZING WORK!!
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Post by danielle on Feb 15, 2016 3:55:50 GMT -5
I wonder if this will be continued. At the moment I don't have any plans to continue it. The idea behind it was a stand alone and sort of tie-in to A Glimpse of White. I purposely wanted it to finish with an open ending, slightly ominous, with the possibility of tying into ROTS or a different future altogether. Thank you all your kind words of praise. |
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Post by Briseis on Feb 15, 2016 15:29:48 GMT -5
Ooooh okie dokie. Well it was awesome!  |
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I also liked the addition of that last little line coming back to the start of the story. Great read!
