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Post by danielle on Feb 8, 2016 6:33:26 GMT -5
Click the link to read the story. PromisesPlease show your appreciation for the story by replying to this thread. |
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Post by Kate on Feb 14, 2016 5:09:09 GMT -5
Aww, great story. I love how hopeful it is. It's got some darker moments but in the end everything turns out all right. (I really liked the reference to 'master Noel' too by the way  ) |
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Post by danielle on Feb 14, 2016 5:16:55 GMT -5
I like how selfless Padme was being concerning Obi-Wan, without him knowing, and mistaking it for distance. Really sweet.
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 14, 2016 15:18:37 GMT -5
Wonderful! I really liked that distance she places between them after all that happened. It felt very genuine and in character to me. And that she was doing it for him -- someone that always gave so unselfishly to everyone else -- was really beautiful.
“The memories of holding Master Jinn when he was taking his last breath and feeling the lightsaber hilt vibrate in your hands when you fought Anakin. I remember it all.”
This moment gave me chills. Mentioning the vibrations in the lightsaber. That imagery is so vivid! It's almost like I was experiencing his memories with her. That's not easy to do. And you've done it so effortlessly.
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Post by Briseis on Feb 14, 2016 19:49:29 GMT -5
This is incredible! Your imagery is amazing, I was so emotional reading this. And the idea of his memories passing over to her is so interesting, I've never read that before. But I'm so happy that she survived and that they're all together.
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Post by kenobiamidala on Feb 15, 2016 1:09:43 GMT -5
*sniffs* aw i really thought you were to go another way with this but then after the birth of the twins you made it happy and so sweet in the end with Obi Wan playing with the children to Padme confessing how she also had memories he had from Qui Gon's death to the fight with Anakin beautiful work!!! LOVED THIS!!
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