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Post by danielle on Feb 11, 2016 4:35:11 GMT -5
To read the story please click the link below. The Final Goodbye Tissue Warning! Show your appreciation for this story by commenting on this thread. |
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Post by NoobianRose on Feb 13, 2016 3:50:59 GMT -5
 Poor Obi-Wan! *chin wibbles* Danielle told me when she received this to expect a tissue warning and . . . *sniffles* She wasn't kidding. I'm legit in tears. But it a beautiful way because your story is so SO well done, Crystal. You capture the emotion and the magnitude of it so simply and poignantly that it cuts straight to the heart of the reader. I can't speak for anyone else's heart, so I'm speaking of mine. |
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Post by danielle on Feb 13, 2016 4:17:56 GMT -5
""I'm sorry I failed you Padmé. I hope that you forgive me," he whispered, as a fresh assault of tears fell from his blue-grey eyes."
*sniff, grabbing tissues*
I just want to jump into the story and give Obi-Wan a hug after that line. There is such a sense of poignancy through this story, beautifully captured and eloquently expressed.
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Post by kenobiamidala on Feb 13, 2016 4:40:45 GMT -5
Tissues needed INDEED!!!!
that was so beautiful right in the heart and it was well written and you could feel Obi Wan's pain and talking to her about takig her home, and Leia and Luke *wipes tears*
BEAUTIFUL, SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!!
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Post by Kate on Feb 13, 2016 12:37:19 GMT -5
Oh man, definitely tissue warning! ;__;
Excellent piece, though. I love how well it fits in with the canon of the movies. This is pretty much how I always imagine things to be myself; with Obi-Wan secretly being a little (or a lot) in love with her, but not willing to admit it because of the Jedi order and Anakin and such ... Beautiful portrayal.
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Post by Briseis on Feb 13, 2016 18:51:59 GMT -5
Oh my gosh this is so beautiful, I don't even know what to say. This is pretty much on point with how I always thought he would react and what would happen after Padmé died. Urgh and when he spoke of the twins... It hurt so much! You did such a brilliant job with this, that tissue warning was definitely needed!
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Post by misschris on Feb 15, 2016 17:29:12 GMT -5
Thanks guys, glad you liked it! I'm so humbled by your encouragement, it means a lot coming from all the talent in the room. Hugs for Obi-Wan!
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