Eye of the Storm by Rosalie

[danielle]

To read the story click the link below.

The Eye of the Storm

Show your appreciation for this story by replying to this thread.

[danielle]

*grabs a fan* thew! I love this interlude from the clone wars, the way Padme tells what to do, how he take her up on it, and the emotions they feel during it. The end leaves you wondering what might happen next, if they're tempted again. There's such a eloquent wit about all of this as well, the imagery is stunning.

[Kate]

Woohoo, this was awesome! Your descriptions were so realistic and life-like, I just felt like I was out there in that rain too! And the kiss ... or should I say kisses - were totally hot! You're a true master of the pen, everything about this just worked!

[Briseis]

Oh Rosalie, this was utterly magnificent! Your talent is amazing, I felt like I was right there watching! Oh snap... That makes me sound like quite the voyeur. Oh well. I giggled when he stiffly kissed her. Like bae, what are you doing?? I really loved this hun, and your dedication at the beginning. THANK YOU!! *hugs*

[NoobianRose]

@ Danielle - Thank you, my friend. I appreciate the comments. I wanted to do something a bit more lighthearted . . . but then dark and sexy kinda bled in. Lol. As for that mystery about what might happen later?? I have some thoughts about that.

@ Kate - That's so generous. Thank you for that. I'm glad it teleported you right into the storm. Hope you had an umbrella! Hehe.

@ Nat - *blushes* That's quite a set of compliments! And it's okay, we fangirls are all voyeurs to some extent. Hehe. I'm really glad you liked this. And you're so welcome. It was you and Danielle that really gave me the motivation to finish it!

[kenobiamidala]

oooooh I do love Clone Wars stories {i miss that series so much} and this was quite a very beautiful, romantic and sexy one! from Obi Wan sensing her to following her and their romantic encounter it was gorgeous and amazing really enjoyed this from start to finish

[misschris]

“Oh for heaven’s sake, Obi-Wan Kenobi! Propriety and decorum now? You said yourself there’s no time. Just do it!” - I was laughing so hard at that line, as well as Obi-Wan (thankfully) avoiding getting hit in the groin. I think my favourite bit was when Obi-Wan didn't snap back into Jedi mode when they had stopped kissing, very much caught up in the moment. Love the detail about the lip gloss!

[NoobianRose]

@ Lauren: "Beautiful, romantic and sexy"! My goodness, those words are quite high praise indeed! I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to comment. *hugs*

@ Crystal: Hehe. I'm so glad you were laughing and enjoying this! I worry sometimes when I try to write funny stories that they'll only be funny to me. Lol. So thank you. I appreciate your kind words very much.