Feedback - Lauren (FFF)

[Briseis]

Hi everyone! Please leave some feedback on Lauren's vid "Fighting For Family"

Vidder's notes/description/storyline:

This one is called "Fighting for Family" and is set after the second story. Padme is still Queen, she and Obi Wan now have two children and there are two OCs in the story so the cast is as followed-

Ewan McGregor - Obi Wan Kenobi
Natalie Portman - Padme Amidala
Hayden Christensen - Anakin Skywalker
Samuel Joslin - Jacen Kenobi
McKenna Grace - Kiara Kenobi
Rebecca Ferguson - Shira
Katie McGrath - Thalia

Music: 'You'll Be Queen One Day' by Ramin Djawadi (Game of Thrones soundtrack)

[danielle]

Intriguing! I thought I recognised the music. Very interesting.

[NoobianRose]

I liked this one! The music was well chosen and the clips were really dynamic. A very interesting story idea!

If I were to change something? I think I'd give the longer quotes a bit longer to play out. It was a bit quick for me to read sometimes.

But really wonderful work all-round!

[Deleted]

I hope there's a sequel or something to go along with this because I'd love to see what happens next! Great job!!!

[gronsparris]

I agree with danielle, intriguing! Will there be a continuation?

[krystal91]

That seems really an interesting story!!!

[kenobiamidala]

Feb 18, 2017 14:51:43 GMT -5 gronsparris said:

I agree with danielle, intriguing! Will there be a continuation?

Aw thanks for the lovely comment. I can't say too much but there could be something in Day 2 but not saying if its a video or something else

[lonestardrifters]

the moment Jacen Kenobi and Kiara Kenobi come in we were like ahhhhh. Then the story got real. like everyone else, hope there is to be more at some point.

[Briseis]

This is so brilliant Lauren!! I love this storyline and this is so interesting. Excellent work sweetie